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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 11/11/2009 5:28:00 PM
nicely penned, sad situation of the orphaned children.
Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2009 5:17:00 PM
Very touching write. The topic of orphans is needed to get people's attention that there are children who need help and homes. Keep writing. Sara
Date: 11/11/2009 5:28:00 PM
nicely penned, sad situation of the orphaned children.
Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2009 5:17:00 PM
Very touching write. The topic of orphans is needed to get people's attention that there are children who need help and homes. Keep writing. Sara
Florentina Laic
Date: 11/25/2009 9:20:00 AM
Multumesc mult, Iolanda. Mi-au placut foarte mult poeziile tale. Apreciez profunzimea gandului si filozofia acestei poezii. Succes in continuare! Cu drag, Florentina
Date: 11/25/2009 9:20:00 AM
Multumesc mult, Iolanda. Mi-
daver austin
Date: 11/24/2009 6:39:00 AM
A hot flash indeed! Good write, Iolanda
A hot flash indeed! Good write, Iolanda
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/23/2009 9:48:00 PM
Wow! Just Wow! Love the way you wove science and fantasy together in this amazing write, Iolanda! You have a great grasp of earth science and the reference to "Lava of our souls" is compelling. (And I am a feeder of seagulls who often thinks of "The Birds" as well!) Love, Carolyn
Date: 11/23/2009 9:48:00 PM
Wow! Just Wow! Love the way you wove science and fantasy together in this amazing write, Iolanda! You have a great grasp of earth science and the reference to "Lava of our souls" is compelling. (And I am a feeder of seagulls who often thinks of "The Birds" as well!) Love, Carolyn
Tim Ryerson
Date: 11/23/2009 9:07:00 PM
Really great stuff here...puts me right up there on that mountain-top in 'skinny oxygen'...(at least that's my interpretation) Mountain magic!! Beautiful flow of words...Tim
Date: 11/23/2009 9:07:00 PM
Really great stuff here...puts me right up there on that mountain-
Carol Brown
Date: 12/16/2009 3:22:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us today Iolanda. Love, Carol
Date: 12/16/2009 3:22:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us today Iolanda. Love, Carol
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/15/2009 2:36:00 PM
This poem has a great beat to it and I love the way the dancing colors and rhythm reflect Brazilian culture. Very nice work, Iolanda! Wishing you a very happy holiday season. Love, Carolyn
Date: 12/15/2009 2:36:00 PM
This poem has a great beat to it and I love the way the dancing colors and rhythm reflect Brazilian culture. Very nice work, Iolanda! Wishing you a very happy holiday season. Love, Carolyn
Elaine George
Date: 1/25/2010 8:56:00 AM
Absolutely breath-
Ruben Ortellao
Date: 1/24/2010 5:29:00 PM
I loooove this line: "She never knew Souls can melt in liquid desire"!!!! Intriguing title, Iolanda... it's like there is something you don't want to share... : ) ..."He lets her pony tail loose in a 'Be gentle' whisper"... Terrific eroticism, here!! Great job. Ruben.
Linda Witt-
Date: 1/24/2010 3:39:00 PM
This is lovely...and so mysterious. Leaves me wondering about the back story.......