Iolanda, this was great. I really enjoyed it. Your word usage is perfect in this write and the title caught my eye and I was very pleased with the read. Thanks
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Lisa
#2 by Liane Schmidt, Sep 23, 2007
This was a beautiful masterpiece. I was swept up in the passion, in the refreshing stream of thought, it is beautiful.
Exquisite.
Best wishes.
Sincerely,
-Liane Schmidt.
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Lisa No
A Little Bit of Romania in Monterey, CA: A Short Interview with the Sunseri Family Sep 23, 2007 Sandra Petersen Beautiful descriptions. I like the imagery throughout this piece.
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Teralani - E Ku'u Aloha
Iolanda -all I can say about that is WOW - I mean WOW Breathtaking imaginary - excellent flow - Man you broke the mold with this poem - very very impressive - I just loved it - God Bless, MJ
Mickey Pig Knuckles
Date: 11/1/2008 8:45:00 AM
Iolanda, what a wonderful poem penned by you as I give you my Congratulations for being featured here. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing with us all... MPK
Michael Jordan
Date: 10/30/2008 7:12:00 PM
Iolanda - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless
Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 10/28/2008 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on the featuring of your poem "Sunstroke." Vince
Iolanda Scripca
Date: 10/27/2008 12:20:00 PM
Thank you all! Your opinion means a lot to me.
Carol Brown
Date: 10/27/2008 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Karen O'Leary
Date: 10/26/2008 4:56:00 PM
The vivid imagery works well to share this sad story. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
sharon weimer
Date: 10/26/2008 3:11:00 PM
Wow, there is such depth to this amazing poetry. So much here I would like to back and reread. I will. Congratulations on a well deserved featured write. Love, Shar
tara jennings
Date: 11/17/2009 7:55:00 AM
I remember the utter emptiness and numb shock when my mother died, the grief there and felt but completely removed from my consious thought, I was in shock for a long time. This piece was very well written.
Linda-Marie Bariana
Date: 11/15/2009 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments, Iolanda, in your poem this day of reading for me... wonderful expressions of a loss.. I too have lost my Mother.. and maybe u would enjoy reading "Metamorphosis" or "A Mother's Ways" or "Empty Tomb" or "In Memoriam" all tributes to mine in particular but all can relate to the words... thankxxx for sharing and for your lovely comments on my poetry .. u are right... who can do more for a human touch than a kiss... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/15/2009 6:46:00 AM
Iolanda, this write is wonderful! such amazing talent! and thanks, always, for your kind comments! jimbo
Pamela Griffiths
Date: 11/14/2009 7:10:00 PM
Oh what lovely words.... Pam
john freeman
Date: 11/14/2009 12:03:00 PM
Such a masterful Poem Iolanda. One that has so very much to say. And you have said it all so very well. I feel the hurt of every mistreated soul, animals included, Children especially. Must be the same hurt that God feels. Sincerely, Love, Moses
James Fraser
Date: 11/13/2009 9:21:00 AM
Wonderful, but sad piece Iolanda, thank you for sharing and your lovely comments on my poems >> James
Logan Saucillo
Date: 11/12/2009 2:51:00 PM
great thoughts put to pen. don't stop writing =) you keep posting and sharing because i love this. your talent is limitless. use it.
Donna Golden
Date: 11/11/2009 11:19:00 PM
Haunting, complex piece, Iolanda! Very well done. Hugs, Donna